My first landing page (Alpha 1.0)…

This isnt even live yet, so I have no actual metrics. Just want to get some feedback.
Will be focused on Microsoft SharePoint related keywords.
So far the feedback ive gotten internally at work is…not so great.
http://www.hensongroup.com/landing/m…services2.html
Go ahead, rip it apart ive already been torn into at work so ive got a thick skin

Original post by malcolmlo