Please review my faq/sales copy

Hi, for the project I am about to launch I have a faq/sales copy in which I want to tell the reader what the program is all about, how it works, etc.
Can I get someone to give me his opinion on it?.
Is it properly written in a natural english way? (I am not english).
Does it do the job of explaining what it's all about and how it works?
Most importantly, does it convince the reader to want to join the program?
Thanks, here it is:

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